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Senseless
by The Word Weaver, Deb on February 7th, 2012

Last fall I was just venturing into the poetry waters, very unsure of my footing and afraid of falling. My dear, wise daughter, who is also a writer, nudged me further into the poetry pond. I was fearfully clinging to the rules and formats from my childhood remembrances of "how poetry is written." Ali pried them from my figurative fingers and found the following photo for me online at www.flickr.com. She said, "Mom, just write. What do you think of when you see this?"

What I saw broke my heart. For though my poem is fictional, I know that many, many children live in fearful, dangerous situations all over this world.

I hope this post inspires you to pray for children. To love the ones you know lavishly. To be a safe place for them. To help those you you can. To act on their behalf. To be the difference that will help them make sense of their world and enable them to live freely.
Special thanks to D. Sharon Pruitt (Pink Sherbet Photography), the original owner of this photo, 206812690. Used by permission of her creative commons license.

"Senseless"

Awakened in the dark,
I lie,
Tense and taut.
Sounds like pain,
Feels like fear.

Compelled toward the light,
I creep,
Silent and sly.
Smells like danger,
Feels like fear.

Hidden behind the chair,
I peer,
quivering and quiet.
Looks like war,
Feels like fear.

Flung between them,
I strike,
Heavy and hard.
Tastes like death,
Feels like freedom.

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Copyright 2012, The Word Weaver, Deb Weaver


Posted in One Another, Poetic Thoughts    Tagged with Poetry, Fear, Abuse, Anger, Children, Death, Freedom, Responsibility


10 Comments

Mary - February 7th, 2012 at 3:32 PM
tastes like death
feels like freedom..


the only rule
is no rule.. wonderful poetry
The Word Weaver, Deb - February 7th, 2012 at 4:02 PM
Thanks, Mary! I love words! I appreciate you taking the time to read AND comment!
Shelly - February 7th, 2012 at 5:53 PM
Deb, I love this! I can't wait to dig deeper and see what else you've written! :)
The Word Weaver, Deb - February 7th, 2012 at 6:03 PM
Thank you, Shelly! If you want to receive the posts by email, you may do so using the form on the contact me page! Otherwise, feel free to keep checking back!
Ali Weaver - February 7th, 2012 at 7:46 PM
Beautiful! Always happy to tell you to relax and throw the rule book out the window! ;)
The Word Weaver, Deb - February 7th, 2012 at 7:48 PM
Thank you! You make me laugh and smile, sweet gal!
sandy - March 7th, 2012 at 6:19 PM
love it
The Word Weaver, Deb - March 7th, 2012 at 6:42 PM
Thank you, Sandy! I appreciate you reading! Your photography evokes powerful thoughts--I do hope you'll pursue a business with it!
Darcy - March 8th, 2012 at 1:58 PM
Very nice......do you ever write poems about politics or bellybuttons!? Keep up the good work darling.
The Word Weaver, Deb - March 8th, 2012 at 2:29 PM
Hey Darcy! Thanks for reading and commenting. I can't say I've ever written about either...yet!
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